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    NEW STORY!! IDEA FOR A TITLE?

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    PrincessVannah13
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    NEW STORY!! IDEA FOR A TITLE?

    Post by PrincessVannah13 on Mon Feb 16, 2009 2:40 am

    Prologue

    They started to corner us, when a burst of light came through the roof.
    Their skin sparkled like diamonds. They had ruby red eyes. And one
    used to be my best friend…………..
    “Impossible!” I managed to choke out



    Chapter One
    We were all normal….once. Everything had balance, nothing was abnormal.
    I’m here to prove you wrong. It was a normal day in gym, we(Team ) were
    Playing our team rival(Team 2). We had six left, I was one of those six. There
    Were 7 of them left to get out, one of them was our grade hooker who was a top
    Of the heap S.O.B. She was yelling plain straight up rude things at us.
    “Haylea, you’re so dumb you make the Special-ed kids look smart!!”
    “Ashley, you’re so fat when you walk people think it’s the jolly green giant!”
    “Beth, your so ugly you make Mr. Martin look handsome!!”
    That one did it.
    I growled at her, pulled back, and threw that ball as hard and fast as I could.
    The ball hit her in the stomach. A gasp left her mouth. She flew backwards and hit
    the bleachers. I instantly knew something wasn’t right, I’d NEVER been able to throw that hard or fast! My thoughts became one big blur…….I blacked out
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    <3LC_lynn<3

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    Re: NEW STORY!! IDEA FOR A TITLE?

    Post by <3LC_lynn<3 on Mon Feb 16, 2009 9:10 am

    pms! it seems lyk a good idea, and is gonna get interesting! <3
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    holagurrl
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    Post by holagurrl on Mon Feb 16, 2009 11:24 am

    Sounds really good!


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    Aphla Lola

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    Post by Aphla Lola on Tue Feb 17, 2009 5:57 pm

    yea, it really does.

    xoxo-Lola
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    Goddess

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    Post by Goddess on Wed Feb 18, 2009 6:35 pm

    pms!!! wat about the title of... followed???
    i dunno...

    alycat13

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    Post by alycat13 on Sun Feb 22, 2009 8:54 pm

    pmn!
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    PrincessVannah13
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    Post by PrincessVannah13 on Tue Feb 24, 2009 7:13 pm

    “Owwwww…”I moaned. My head was hurting like crazy!
    “Vannah, are you okay?” Someone asked me. I opened my eyes to my boyfriend’s and best friends’ faces. They all had a look of worry on their face.
    “I think so. What happened? Where’s Emily? I know we don’t like her but I….”
    “She’s in the hospital, you are too.” Beth said quickly
    “What? Why? What happened I know I hit the floor hard but not hard enough to put me in the hospital!” I exclaimed.
    “Should we tell her?” Morgan asked.
    “Tell me what?” I said
    “I don’t think she’s ready.” Sara replied
    “Ready for what?” I asked louder.
    “I think we should….”Will (my boyfriend) started to say before I cut him off
    “WHAT ARE YOU NOT TELLING ME!!!!!?” I screamed so loud I threw everybody back against the wall.
    “Whoa! She’ll have to work on her temper!” said a Doctor that walked in.
    “Who are you and what are they not telling me?!” I exclaimed.
    “I am Dr. Violet*. And you are at AREA 100. An even more top secret place than
    Area 51. You and your friends are special.” She said calmly
    “Special…Ed? Special... as in smarter than normal seventh graders?”
    “No you have special powers. We did tests to find out what. When we find out
    what they are you’ll have training to harness them.”
    “WHAT?! I HAVE POWERS!? HOW? WHO? WHAT?” I threw everybody back again. “Whoops…” I said”Hehe!”
    “Well we know you have sonic powers for sure!” Will laughed.
    “Why didn’t you guys tell me about this? “I asked them all.
    “Well you where supposed to bloom* before the rest of us but you didn’t and we were sworn not to tell others.” Beth said quickly
    “Tell me, what are your powers?” I questioned.
    “Speed.” Beth said
    “Obviously!” I Giggled
    “Earth.” Sara smiled
    “Emotions.” Sam giggled
    “Mind Reading/telekinesis!” Paige answered.
    “Strength and Speed.” Will said.
    “Okay, when will I know what my powers are?” I asked the doctor.
    “Right now the results are in!” She paused to read the paper, “Oh, Oh my.”
    “What? Is it bad?” I asked worriedly.
    “Not exactly…”She trailed off.
    “WELL, WHAT THEN?” My voice raised quite a bit.
    “You are the controller.” She said solemnly.
    All my friends and boyfriend gasped.
    “What’s that?”

    kirsten <3

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    Post by kirsten <3 on Tue Feb 24, 2009 7:53 pm

    wow awesome story! keep going!

    what about "The Special Ones" for the title?

    I was gonna say Specials but thats kinda already taken by Scott Westerfeld...
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    PrincessVannah13
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    Post by PrincessVannah13 on Tue Feb 24, 2009 11:06 pm

    ACK WRITERS BLOCK!!

    alycat13

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    Post by alycat13 on Fri Feb 27, 2009 4:08 pm

    pmn!
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    <3LC_lynn<3

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    Post by <3LC_lynn<3 on Sun Mar 08, 2009 6:30 pm

    PMN!!!! This is a really good idea!!

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